Tuesday, November 11, 2008

Nieces - so close to finished...

The bits and pieces to touch up and finalise are not many now, thank goodness. I'm going to finish this in my own time and begin on something new next week in class.



There is something just not right with my younger niece's face - I just can't put my finger on it... something to ponder anyway.

2 comments:

MadeByBruce said...

hard to be sure from this distance, but perhaps her mouth isn't parallel with her eyes, I'm not sure if maybe the lightest touch of darker definition underneath (her) left bottom lip could bring it all into alignment? The other one really looks like a girl, the bottom one seems somehow unchildlike... maybe the angles are sharper or there is more detail in the chalk making the skin seem less smooth?

Elaine said...

Thanks for the comments - much appreciated. I know her face just isn't right. I'm going to set this aside for a week or so and then come back to it I think.